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04-22-2010
09:02 PM
cvparatrooper
YouTube - Burdens of War: Contractors and the Global War on Terror
I need help with my homework. This is an alternative media project I did for english. What do you guys think?
04-22-2010
09:03 PM
cvparatrooper
I'm interested in outside opinion. College kids are basically slaves to the media, and their opinions reflect it.
04-22-2010
09:17 PM
ELKSLAYER
That is true stuff and well put. I give you a thumbs up.
04-22-2010
09:46 PM
cvparatrooper
Thanks Curtis.
04-22-2010
11:04 PM
BioHMMWV
What level English class is this for? At position :25 you might want to reverse the order of importance when you talk about the financial cost, and lives lost. It would have more power if you list the human loss before the financial loss. Also, (though I like it) you may want to change the picture of GW displaying the obscene gesture. Some teachers may find that powerful, and others may find that offensive ( and doc points).
The volume of the narrator needs to be raised from 2:10 on. The narrator's voice is a little difficult to hear over the music. There was a lot of deadspace between points 3:05 and 3:25
At 3:29 Adding successful to "A
successful
war against terrorism" would be better.
At the end "And America would never sleep peacefully again." almost sounds like it is due to the mercenaries. You could put, Because of these people, and our armed forces, America can sleep peacefully again.
I don't know if your class is below or above the ones I have taken.
I have received A's in Eng 90,101,102, 231, 232
04-22-2010
11:33 PM
cvparatrooper
Thanks for the advice bio. This is for a 102 class. I wish I would have spent a little more time editing. After publishing it, I noticed the same thing about the voice on the last part. I listened to the part about lives lost and monetary damage several times and thought about changing it. I wasn't sure if it seemed like I was downplaying the amount of deaths, or refraining from changing the subject from what really matters. Again, thanks for the review. This was exactly what I was looking for.
04-23-2010
02:05 PM
Sycostang67
SGT. SLAUGHTER FTW!!
04-25-2010
11:53 PM
Launie
Great job Chris for a kid you are more profound than I had realized, it is a great display of your honor and courage. I could tell it come from your heart that you had been there done that and know what you where about. I have learned through life that to get a good grade you have to learn what the teacher wants and give it to them the way they want it. I don't know who your professor is but good luck. Thanks for sharing and serving our great country. Here's to you Buddy!!!!!! Deby
04-25-2010
11:57 PM
Launie
I liked the hell out of it , I agree on the volume part and have no issue on G.W. giving the finger. But I'm not an english teacher
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