I'm taking a 100 level computer class, and getting red all over my essays for sentence and paragraph structure. I pride myself in my grammar and structure and I REALLY feel like I'm getting screwed on these.

Anyone qualified to give me an opinion? I'd like to email my essays with the red all over them and see if I'm really writing that poorly.

 

Can you post it up here? We can check it out.

 

I may if nobody is willing to do it for me by email. I just don't wanna get shredded on here.

 

I'll look at em, I've written quite a few papers, and gotten good grades, but the only thing is what are we going to accomplish the professor doesn't probably care what a bunch of diesel heads have to say, I'll share my opinion though, tyler.walk@yahoo.com is my email

 

Have you seen the way alot of us type?

If I type "teh" instead of "the" one more time I'm gonna scream!

 

yeah. I'll send it out to you a little later. I just need to know whether I'm doing it wrong or not, because everything I've learned tells me I'm not doing THAT badly, yet I'm getting almost 1/2 credit on this **** because he doesn't like the way I make paragraphs. I swear this guy doesn't know english.

 

welcome to college, I had more deductions for grammar in a Biology class than i did in a 300 level english class, and the papers were written in the same format, teachers need to stick to what they are teaching in my opinion

 

I'll probably throw one up a little later. I'm hungry right now and too pissed off to even look at them.

 

hey I have gotten A's in all my english crap and just finished my british lit class. send it to wsm.weatherby@yahoo.com .I will take a look and send it back to you with the corrections in bold.